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Those pesky line breaks!

Journal Entry: Mon Jun 16, 2008, 12:09 AM
Should you feel so inclined, would you mind suggesting line breaks for the poems in my gallery? I suck at them!

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  • Listening to: Girl -- Tori Amos

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  • Current Age: 28
  • Current Residence: A forest, with trees so dense and high they look like mountains.
  • Favourite movie: Currently? Raspy Batman voice aside, I'd have to say "The Dark Knight."
  • Operating System: Mac OS X

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~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: 1 day 9 hours ago
You're welcome!

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
~inulg:iconinulg: 4 days 10 hours ago
thanks for the watch!! :) Thank you for enjoying my work!! :heart:

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taco love.
~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: 4 days 13 hours ago
You're welcome! :heart:

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
~HabitualFlippancy:iconHabitualFlippancy: 5 days 21 hours ago
Thanks for the fave sweety!!

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Sona si latine loqueris.

"Anybody remotely interesting is mad, in some way or another." The Doctor
~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: Jul 14, 2008, 6:56:42 AM
You're most welcome!

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
=Lavah:iconLavah: Jul 14, 2008, 3:43:54 AM
hi! thanks a lot for the watch ;) :heart:

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the one who likes blinding colors.
~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: Jul 13, 2008, 4:38:02 PM
You're welcome. It's a lovely poem!

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: Jul 13, 2008, 4:37:21 PM
Indeed I am! Hello, hello. :heart:

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
~snowbug:iconsnowbug: Jul 2, 2008, 9:42:34 AM
Oh hi, you're here :)

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*jade-pandora:iconjade-pandora: Jun 27, 2008, 1:33:50 AM Mood: Cheerful
i want to thank you for adding me to your watch, and for :+fav:ing my poem, "Eclipse" [link] ...i'm so glad you like it :thanks:

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I am Lit', therefore, I am!
~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: Jun 12, 2008, 3:42:21 AM
Feelings of regret and loneliness; parallels between childhood and adulthood.

I don't want to outright discuss these things, but perhaps some clarification is necessary? Either way, I've scrapped the poem until I can revise it, heh.

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
~X3msnake:iconX3msnake: Jun 12, 2008, 3:30:29 AM
I dont know, it seems to be missing a continuity line. what did you wanted to express?

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~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: May 30, 2008, 2:08:48 PM
You're quite welcome!

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"Live those dreams, play with them, build altars to them. It is not yet the ideal, but it points in the right direction."
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*ssmithphotography:iconssmithphotography: May 27, 2008, 3:01:04 PM
hi :)

thanks for the friendship & faves!!
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~underwaterlily:iconunderwaterlily: May 16, 2008, 6:12:48 PM
You're ever so welcome, of course!

Oh, man, I didn't get to see the end. I'll have to rent it! I loved the first half, then I allowed myself to be distracted by teh internetz, heh.

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~nepasavaler:iconnepasavaler: May 15, 2008, 4:48:36 PM
:heart: thanks for the fave on "the night."

PS: Dead Again is one of my favorite movies! Love the twist.

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